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标题: 第十四届小说奖第二期复评 [打印本页]
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
标题: 第十四届小说奖第二期复评
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">黑天才推荐</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">不有《</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">异禀》<br/></span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944" target="_blank"><font face="宋体">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944</font></a><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">死弱弱</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;">《</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">灯下黑》<br/></span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25695" target="_blank"><font face="宋体">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25695</font></a><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">《异禀》这篇小说特别好看，写得很好。这个题目稍显逊，以及</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black;">斯蒂芬出门找女孩</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">用起的“你”这个第二人称也可斟酌。这样色彩浓郁的描写，语言精美，好几个转折都让我觉得惊喜，而且不乏俏皮的幽默，还有带有智慧和诗意的句子。其实我不挺不情愿说“诗意”这个词的，因为作者没有故意使用它。所以在结构中，语言并不显得突兀。作者对环境有着相当的敏锐度，想象力丰富又不过度。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;"></span></font><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;"><font face="宋体">《灯下黑》感情充裕又并不显现得明显，包裹在绵延的语言中的东西慢慢地、温柔地、像心一样平稳跳动又给整个身体活力。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>
[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-6 11:47:51编辑过]
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">冯与蓝推荐</span></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">将计就计《盯视者》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946" target="_blank"><font color="#000000">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946</font></a><p></p></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">一篇极大程度上体现了语言的张力与渗透性的好小说。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">赵松推荐</span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">将计就计《盯视者》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946" target="_blank"><font face="Times New Roman" color="#000000">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946</font></a></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">这是一种扎实而稳健的风格。每个字甚至每个标点符号，都似乎细细琢磨过，尽可能放得恰如其位，就像京剧名角即便是练嗓，也要有字正腔圆的感觉，尽管在没上场的时候这样严肃地磨练会让旁观者觉得有些过于讲究了，但没关系，这就是一种态度，咿呀数段，也自有其微妙的韵味和堂堂正正的腔调。场景在不时的切换，人物似乎只是走动的影子，而所谓的逃遁者，虽然屏住呼吸般的尽量不引人的注目，可是额头上仍旧偶尔会闪出一抹微暗的光亮……会觉得作者就像一个形象干净利落的练家，表情温和，不动声色，动作简练而注意内敛，矜持之中又带着某种近乎过度讲究的危险作派，但又并不会让人觉得做作，尽管有些字眼明显是过于讲究声音与味道了，真的就像票友听某个角的戏，只被那腔调所吸引，似乎可以不必计较唱的是什么，字正腔圆的，不管故事了。优点与缺点，尽可以这里琢磨。推荐它的理由，在于它是如何在临近危险的写作状态中保持住自身平衡的，以及对小说构成上的非叙事性尝试，耐人琢磨一二。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>
[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-6 11:48:12编辑过]
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">生铁推荐</span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">死弱弱《灯下黑》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25695" target="_blank">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25695</a><p></p></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">版主不再能参选了，这使本来轻松的复评变得有点复杂。衡量一个好的小说不仅在其结构的繁简，也不仅在于写作者花费了多少时间，和作者是否经验丰富也没有直接关系。我在死弱弱《灯下黑》和将计就计的《盯视者》之间权衡了很久。由于死弱弱的作品有一些更为新鲜的趋势，更新、更嫩、更有继续发育的期盼，所以我选择它。她对语言的把握让我敬佩。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">凌丁推荐</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">不有《异禀》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944" target="_blank">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944</a><p></p></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">因为评委不得奖的新规则，生铁的新港就不推荐了。推荐词：《异禀》读了两遍，直到读第二遍的时候还感觉到紧张——担心句子与句子之间的连接在闪转腾挪中突然失控——但是在绝大多数情况下都平稳度过，敏捷、灵巧、不着痕迹，只有偶尔的小小趔趄。关注文中语句间的组合是有意思的事，文章的安静有助于把注意力集中于此。此外，文章还让我想起了“斗室中的旅行”，足不出户，思接千里。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">欲望的旋涡推荐</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">将计就计的《盯视者》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=2&replyID=173352&id=24946&skin=0" target="_blank">http://www.heilan.com/forum/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=2&replyID=173352&id=24946&skin=0</a><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">视角的人为撕裂是这篇小说吸引人的地方，未到结尾之前都会让人有一种想看“他究竟能晃到什么程度”的想法，但正如作者说的“做得不够极端”。语感参差不齐。</span>
[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-6 11:48:52编辑过]
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">程波推荐<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">不有</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">《异禀》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944" target="_blank">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944</a></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">权衡了一下，还是决定选不有的《异禀》。《灯下黑》、《<span lang="EN-US">34路环线公交》、《盯视者》三篇是我犹豫了一下的主要原因。<p></p></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">死弱弱这篇小说的想法比上篇更集中了，感觉也很好，但问题还是有些随意和偷懒。《<span lang="EN-US">34路环线公交》总体上说简单浅近，虽有些平淡，不过结尾部分却把前面营造出的乏味、无聊和绝望提升了，而且切入点有些新意。我注意到了《盯视者》稳健的叙述风格，写出这样的文字不容易，但在“小说性”上并不能让人满意，就是说，我想看到的是文字背后那个由各种东西纠集在一起，但最终触动了我的内核；文字和叙述是不够的，内核源于灵感或者提炼。 <p></p></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">《异禀》的前后其实并不十分统一，前面几大段意识流味道十足的絮语式的描摹段落（学作者时髦地使用括号，<span lang="EN-US">“我”）和作为过渡的心理现实主义写法（“斯蒂芬”是你还是我？），再到结尾很现实的场景和对话部分（原来她就是禾禾），让人有“文体拼贴”的感觉。不过，一来，小说的想法我喜欢，所谓有内核；二来，小说的叙述是我习惯和欣赏的一种，结构上虽有头重脚轻之嫌，但叙述的作用不仅弥补了这一点，而且还使得小说结构上呈现出了一种不平衡的美感。其三，作者的小说观念更能引起我的共鸣一些（本来想说更先进一些），语感也很不错。<p></p></span></span></p>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">顾耀峰推荐</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">不有</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">《异禀》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944" target="_blank">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944</a><p></p></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">小说奖复评推荐词：评委的作品撇开了，不谈。我推荐不有的《异禀》，此外极具竞争力的是死弱弱的《灯下黑》。《异禀》更具有完整性，更具有作品的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">“</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">成熟度</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">”</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">。它的好与坏都存在，也都一目了然，好象是个成年人的脸，已经长开了。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">
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作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: algerian;">童末推荐</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: algerian;"></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: algerian;">不有《</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: algerian;">异禀》<br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944" target="_blank"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944</font></a>
<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: algerian;">死弱弱</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: algerian;">《</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: algerian;">灯下黑》<br/></span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: algerian;"><br/><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25695" target="_blank"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25695</font></a>
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作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"></span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">邱雷推荐 </span></p><p style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; TEXT-ALIGN: justify;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">将计就计《盯视者》<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><a href="http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946</a></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">这是篇写得传统而见功底的小说。将容易玄而虚的意识活动代入细腻、精当的客观环境的描述中，从而使前者落地、有了身形质量、更加切实可信，虚与实的两股力量缠绕着并行，理智和情绪似乎也因此共同呈现为语言和叙述上的单体。它在词句上自始至终的紧密、坚硬都为自身准备了充足的理由，不必再承受苛责。</span></p>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">邱雷推荐</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">将计就计《盯视者》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946<p></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">不有《异禀》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944<p></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">《盯视者》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;">,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">这是篇写得传统而见功底的小说。将容易玄而虚的意识活动代入细腻、精当的客观环境的描述中，从而使前者落地、有了身形质量、更加切实可信，虚与实的两股力量缠绕着并行，理智和情绪似乎也因此共同呈现为语言和叙述上的单体。它在词句上自始至终的紧密、坚硬都为自身准备了充足的理由，不必再承受苛责。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">《异禀》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font face="宋体, MS Song">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">对篇章结构的处理，特别是松紧、疾慢的控制上，显现出作者对文本策略的熟练掌握。前紧后松的设计，言语滋生的赘节，小小地出乎意料的闪光，都为这种熟练提供了证明。对科学（数学）的兴趣是表面上的，并没有将其视作作品的对象，在借用了科学在形象上的力量的同时避开了类型的陷阱，这也是讲究技巧的。</span>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">宇文光推荐</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">孙智正</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;">
</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">《有点疼》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;"><p></p></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian;">http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25576 <p></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">语言和主题的吻合非常美妙。所谓网恋，见网友，应该是很多人熟悉的生活方式了吧，但写的好的并不多。《有点疼》写了一个有点儿奇怪的主角。这个人的性格特别适合网恋，或者倒过来，网恋是特为这种人准备的。然而这个人又注定是网恋的弱者。因为强者无处不在，不会跟你客气。作者对语言和人物的选择恰到好处（如果有过选择的话），易凯及其女友，小西瓜的容貌和身材，都意味深长。不过钟点房里的描写似乎结束的太突然，读者可能会困惑到底发生了什么。虽然下文也有暗示，但再写清楚一些也许更好。</span></p>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">高原推荐</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian;">将计就计《盯视者》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><a href="http://www.heilan.com/periodical/heilan_50/novel_6.htm" target="_blank"><font color="#000000">http://www.heilan.com/periodical/heilan_50/novel_6.htm</font></a><p></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">我觉得这篇小说题目起的不好听</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">当然小说写得挺棒的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">我些词选得略有些冷僻</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">宇文光说字型伤意我觉得很有道理</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">只所以选它是因为我一直偏爱氛围烘托的好的小说</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">另外其他候选小说整体水平稍弱也是一个原因</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.</span></p>
作者: 苏苏漫步 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
由于工作协调和衔接未处理好，晚发了一天，特此向大家道歉!
作者: 阿呆 时间: 2007-8-4 13:43
二期竞争比较激烈。好几个我都喜欢，有夺奖实力。
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