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作者: 姜集    时间: 2007-12-4 19:09
标题: 朋友
<p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">火车的声音由远而近。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">我在等我的朋友。</span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">从来没有见过他,只是手里攥着他的一滴眼泪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">害怕它会蒸发,攥紧了五根手指。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">雨哗哗的下大了,我没有地方可以躲,所以淋湿了全身。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">远方在雨中很模糊,等待的火车像是从一个遥远的故事中开出。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">地上的雨水漫过了我的脚背,发现自己在抖。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">雨滴坠落水面的声音很脆,很有弹性。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">铁轨曾无数次在我黑夜的梦中和黎明的视线中彷徨,也许我曾这样一直静止着。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">雨滴越下越大,敲响了我的头颅。闭上眼睛,想象着朋友到来是的拥抱,心在胸膛里膨胀着。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">一条鱼飞到我的肩膀上,张着大口呼着空气。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">你不觉得闷吗?</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">它说。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">不!我有朋友!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">我回答。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">你有朋友!?你有朋友?!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">它的音调扎伤了我的眼睛。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">我想张开手,但怕蒸发,只好沉没不语。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">你是个笨蛋!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">那鱼冲我说,随后便拍着尾巴飞走了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">脚下有只鸟在嘬我的脚,围着我的脚转了两圈,抬头对我说:</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">你不觉得冷吗?</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”<p></p></span></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">不!我有朋友!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">我回答。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">你的朋友在哪?</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">鸟问。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">我用手指了指铁轨通向的远方,它摇了摇头拍了拍翅膀游走了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">水漫过了我的膝盖,我抖地更厉害了,攥紧了五根手指。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">有好几次我都听见了火车的鸣叫,但都没有向</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'times new roman'">我靠</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">近,所以我知道它们是从远方驶向远方。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">一只蚂蚁撑着叶舟向我漂来:</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">别等了,快逃命吧!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">它向我大喊!</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">不!我有朋友!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">我回答。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="margin-left:26.25pt;text-indent:-5.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:-.5;mso-para-margin-left:2.0gd"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">你的朋友不是你!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">它扔给了我一句话,逆水而下漂走了。</font></span></p><p style="margin-left:26.25pt;text-indent:-5.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:-.5;mso-para-margin-left:2.0gd"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体"></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><br /></span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">水漫过了我的脖子,我将手高高的举起,里面有我朋友的一滴眼泪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="margin-left:26.25pt;mso-para-margin-left:2.5gd"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">我看着远方,天已经黑了,雨仍在下。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:21pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">&nbsp;</span>“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">我不是我的朋友!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”</span><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">疑惑,"他说过要来的"。</span></font></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">水越涨越高,没有了选择,眼泪会溶释在雨水中。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">将手放到眼前,张开了五根手指。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">里面是一滴眼泪,一滴黑色的眼泪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">雨水将我淹没,留给了我彻夜的寂静。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">梦中的我对我说:</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">“</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial"><font face="宋体">梦中的你给了你那滴黑色的眼泪!</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial">”<p></p></span></p><p style="text-indent:26.25pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.5"><font face="宋体"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-hansi-font-family:arial;mso-bidi-font-family:arial">梦中的我从梦中的梦中醒来张望着黑夜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:arial"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p>
作者: 吴海燕    时间: 2007-12-4 21:45
<p>我看,你错误地沉浸在一种错误的感觉中写出了错误的文字又绝对错误地来到了一个错误的地方。</p>
作者: 袁群    时间: 2007-12-4 21:56
<p>梦中的我对我说:“梦中的你给了你那滴黑色的眼泪!”</p><p>梦中的我从梦中的梦中醒来张望着黑夜。</p>
作者: 黑天才    时间: 2007-12-6 21:45
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>吴海燕</i>在2007-12-04 21:45:46的发言:</b><br /><p>我看,你错误地沉浸在一种错误的感觉中写出了错误的文字又绝对错误地来到了一个错误的地方。</p></div><p>我达达的错误是个美丽的错误,我不是错误,是个错误……</p>
作者: 隐忍    时间: 2007-12-6 22:06
哎,我笑了.你们的回帖//
作者: 至尊宝    时间: 2007-12-7 13:39
是诗歌吗?




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