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作者: 李子园    时间: 2008-9-1 10:45
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作者: 李子园    时间: 2008-9-1 10:47
sorry, 本来想发在诗歌栏目。这不算一稿多投吧?呵呵
作者: 笑笑逍遥派    时间: 2008-9-1 10:54
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial">个人修改意见</span></font></p><p><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial"><font size="2"><strong>雁群</strong></font></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial">在无字天空杜撰</span> <br /></font><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial">以阅读的眼神</span> <br /></font><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial">垂钓返潮的记忆</span> <br /></font><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial">浮云被拆迁,日子</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial"></span></font><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial">板起面孔,</span></font><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial"><font size="2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:arial;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-font-family:arial"><font size="2">美梦辞退了人们</font></span></font></span></p>
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作者: 李子园    时间: 2008-9-1 11:00
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作者: 笑笑逍遥派    时间: 2008-9-1 11:06
诗歌是文学素养之集大成,诚所谓玩弄文字于股掌之上的手段,又所谓语言之蛇吐出的明珠。确乎很难,但是几乎所有热爱文学的人都不得不面对这座米诺斯宫。
作者: 笑笑逍遥派    时间: 2008-9-1 11:08
按照常态思维次序,是无法写诗的,更无法写出新诗,好诗。
作者: 李子园    时间: 2008-9-1 11:11
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>笑笑逍遥派</i>在2008-09-01 11:08:17的发言:</b><br />按照常态思维次序,是无法写诗的,更无法写出新诗,好诗。</div><p>1</p>
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