曙光。

金木。

<p>空。</p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-2-9 15:48:56编辑过]

盘尼西林

<font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">刚看到标题、</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">ID</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">后面都跟个句号，还以为是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">90</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">后，看了看小说，又不太像。写得很熟练，开头几段快够上<font color="#ff0000">中出奖</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><font face="宋体" color="#ff0000">乡村题材</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">候选作品了，要是废狗请我作嘉宾评委，我指定推荐这篇。但是慢慢看下来吧，嗯，也没那么坏。像是中了一点乡村题材的毒，又中得不太厉害，不管怎么说都还没有死人啊。然后疾在</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">腠理，不治将恐深呀。其实吧这个小说里还是有一些可以写成小说而不是写成乡村的东西存在着，比如观察得挺仔细，对它所描述的对象是用了心的，语调也还满沉稳，这都是可取的。</span></font>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-2-6 22:23:52编辑过]

欲望的旋涡

<p>不喜欢它的语言，但还是比较沉得住气的</p><p>作为一个练习来看还可以</p>