电梯

南山秀

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\';"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">按了下电钮，朝上的箭头便红艳艳的闪了起来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">门吱地一声便开了。我走进去，里面空无一人。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">脚下铺着红色的地毯。头顶与四壁都是明亮的不锈钢。我看它们时，它们也看着我。我仰起脸，头顶的那张面孔冲我怪诞地一笑。光线不好，它的样子模糊的很。而且扭曲，鼻子与唇线都波浪似的颤着。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我学着模特的样子扭了下身子。这动作，要不是孤身一人，原是断不敢做的。我喜欢漂亮的女人，绝没任何同性恋的倾向。但梦想过自己也能倾城倾国，也梦想过要让所有的女人都嫉妒的咬牙切齿。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">四周都有人冲着我扭动身子。他们无一例外的冲我做娇媚状。让我吃惊的是，里面所有的人都赤裸着身子。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我连忙本能的捂住裆部。唔！幸好没人看到！</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">四周都有人在笑。不用看，光听声音，我就知有的掩嘴、有的咧牙、有的仰脖……。我连忙四顾，仍然没看到人。四周空荡荡地，没有四壁，没有扶手，只有邻近高楼上的灯光不住的自我脚下跌落。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我吓了一跳。这电梯竟然只剩下了一个金属的架子。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">天哪，我这才记起我有恐高症。我的双腿顿时便颤抖起来，再也无力支撑庞大的身体。全身的汗毛孔也迅速打开，冷汗滴滴而落。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我连忙趴下身子，双手死命地捧住金属竖档。我惊恐的抬起头，寻找那些跳动的数字。它们还在颤抖，红艳艳地，</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">150</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">、</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">151</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">、</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">152</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">、</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">153</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">……，速度快的惊人。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">怔愣了片刻，我才想到，这世界上有这么高的楼么？</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我抬头，星空灿烂。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 7.8pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">悚然而惊！我从何来？要往何去？</span></p>

亢蒙

纯粹的片断。这篇很糟糕，作者过于的草率和急于表达。

生铁

且不说意象表达的方式如何，单就这种意象也不吸引人。