[原创] 屋漏痕

风信子

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt 28.5pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">屋漏痕 </span><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">听狐狸娃娃说话，在月光底下，细碎的树影。听着听着就会走神，以为是自己的童年又在重演。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">包括在土穴上冒出的浓烟——仿佛很快红薯就会烤熟了，羊在河坡上吃草，野花摇着细净的脖子，叶<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">片手脚一样不安的抓舞。黄昏正一点点欺近，世界陷入了光与影的模糊中。噢，想起来了，那情形犹</span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">如<br /><br />第一次离乡时母亲的眼神。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我确定这是在竹镇的最后一晚。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“给。”<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“哦！”<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">不是烤红薯，是烤苹果片。狐狸娃娃吹着上面的热气，捏着一片往嘴里送，一定很好吃。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我也试着放一片在嘴里。狐狸娃娃拘谨的坐在我对面，表情期待的望着我。直到我说“好吃”，它才<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">笑了。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">（我突然记起，经过一片坟地时的惶恐。）<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“你觉得小生灵里头，你最喜欢什么？”狐狸娃娃用一只小手托着下巴，嫣然一笑，然后似有期待的<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">看着我。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">小兔子，我眼前立刻跳出一只小白兔，洁白的皮毛，红宝石的眼睛。可是我看了看狐狸娃娃，我的舌<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">头狡猾的拐了弯，我说——<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“狐狸娃娃，没错的，是狐狸娃娃！”<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">狐狸娃娃突然不好意思起来，它抿着嘴角，两只手不安的翻弄着围裙。像一只兔子那样羞涩。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我简直是真的喜欢上它了。我情不自禁的从手腕上解下一根用红绳穿着的桃篮，给它戴到脖子上，像<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我第一次离乡时，母亲给我系在手上那样。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“会有好运的！”<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“我失去了母亲，会再有一个母亲吗？”狐狸娃娃眼睛垂着眼泪。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“哦？”<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">一时静静的，蛐蛐的叫声异常嘹亮。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">小窗子外面，一团雾气掠过月亮，从窗子的缝隙里飘来辛夷花的阵阵香味。狐狸娃娃跑进卧室抱着</span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">一<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">个相框出来。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">天哪，真是只高贵慈爱的狐狸妈妈，我的眼前出现了可怕的幻象，这不是我的母亲吗，去年冬天我给<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">母亲买过一件狐狸大氅，母亲只照相时穿过一次。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我头皮发紧。四肢发抖。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">灯光下，狐狸娃娃的眼睛里竟然有无限的哀伤。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我茫然的环顾了一下狐狸娃娃的房间四周，西边墙壁，有漏雨时留下的痕迹，像一个人的眼泪流过</span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">长<br /><br />长的面颊。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">……我醒了，然后。根本就没有什么小房子，根本就没有什么所谓的系着碎花围裙的狐狸娃娃。我</span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">靠<br /><br />着一棵巨大的杜梨树，阳光明媚的照耀着我周围的世界，不远处是坟地。<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">太累了，我竟然睡了这么久，抬了抬胳膊，发现用红绳穿着的桃篮竟然丢失了，不过就是丢失了吧，<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我想。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">风信子<span lang="EN-US"> <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p>

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1883

<p>不行不行，投机取巧。《花生娃娃》是个例外，不能抱着娃娃不放。</p>

赵松

气息不错，很单纯，但到后面联想到母亲的狐狸大氅，就有些露气了，或许还有更好的方式可以试一试。不过总体上比诗写得好。哈哈。

风信子

<p>TO：1883 我不以为然。（这个也比花生娃娃早。我喜欢娃娃，我就是抱着它不放。）</p><p>TO：赵松。嗯。是到后面有些露气，我写东西快，稍一中断就接不上气。说比诗好，也仅限于这篇和那篇的比较吧。</p><p>给二位两圈微笑。一人一圈。：）：）</p><p>总体，我还不算吝啬吧。</p>

冯与蓝

<p>这个有点日本童话的味道。日本人眼里的狐狸，就是这么慧黠带点忧伤的。</p><p>保护野生动物，禁穿真皮服装。寓意还是很说教啊，要是曲折一点就好了。</p>

风信子

<p>我喜欢狐狸跟兔子。然后就是羊。：）</p><p>兔子耳朵长，羊有角，喜欢狐狸却实在说不清楚。</p><p>——我想表达，很多时候我们会无意伤害到一种事物，一种感情。尽管我们是小心翼翼的，必要的时候还说一点小谎话。</p>[em40]

凌丁

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>风信子</i>在2007-09-18 19:58:00的发言：</b><br /></div><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt 28.5pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes">屋漏痕 </span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt 28.5pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><span style="mso-spacerun:yes"><font color="#ee1169">好</font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">听狐狸娃娃说话，在月光底下，细碎的树影。听着听着就会走神，</span> </p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><font color="#f70968">好</font></span> </p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">以为是自己的童年又在重演。</span> </p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#f70968">不好</font>&nbsp;</span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">包括在土穴上冒出的浓烟——仿佛很快红薯就会烤熟了，羊在河坡上吃草，野花摇着细净的脖子，叶<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">片手脚一样不安的抓舞。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><font color="#ee1169">好</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">黄昏正一点点欺近，世界陷入了光与影的模糊中。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><font color="#f70968">不太好</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">噢，想起来了，那情形犹</span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">如第一次离乡时母亲的眼神。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><font color="#f70968">不好</font><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;</span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">……</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我简直是真的喜欢上它了。我情不自禁的从手腕上解下一根用红绳穿着的桃篮，给它戴到脖子上，像<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我第一次离乡时，母亲给我系在手上那样。<span lang="EN-US"> </span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><font color="#f70997">不好</font></span> </p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">……</span> </p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin:0cm 10.5pt 12pt;line-height:10pt;text-align:left;mso-para-margin-right:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-bottom:1.0gd;mso-para-margin-left:1.0gd;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;mso-pagination:widow-orphan;mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">天哪，真是只高贵慈爱的狐狸妈妈，我的眼前出现了可怕的幻象，这不是我的母亲吗，去年冬天我给<br /><br /></span><span style="color:black;font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">母亲买过一件狐狸大氅，母亲只照相时穿过一次。<span lang="EN-US"> </span></span></p><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<font color="#ee1169"> 不好</font></div><p>&nbsp; …… </p><p>&nbsp;阅读全文像是在玩摘花瓣念叨“爱我”“不爱我”的游戏。</p>

风信子

<p>摘完花瓣，手里只剩下花萼，岂不很忧伤。。。</p><p></p><p>三个好。四个不好。一个不太好。……嗯，正正得正……负负得正……结果还是好多一些。这就犹如一个人五官有个别不完美，但不防碍总体组合是美的道理一样。</p><p>嘻嘻</p><p>[em09]</p><p>（狡辩一下，你说不好的地方，我是认真想了的。^^）</p>

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