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发表于 2007-10-29 00:26:11 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">挺大的播放厅,偌大的屏幕,偶尔有小虫子飞过放映机,在屏幕上就会有个影子,有的观众会说:</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">啊,那是导演精心安排的隐喻啊!</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">,然后看看身旁在打瞌睡的</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">同伴,接着耸耸肩,继续吃着爆米花,在一阵咀嚼声后,是碳酸冲入食道的爽快。这一场已经放完,屏幕上依然打着导演最后的话:</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span><span style="color:#c60a00;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">生活</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;color:#c60a00">,</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"> </span></font><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">对于任何一个男女都非易事</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">.<br /><br /></font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">导演若有其事的,把生活弄得大大,并漆上了红色,可是观众们却没兴趣去再看看这句话,纷纷起身。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><br /></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">观众</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">A</font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">(别人叫他名字的时候似乎隐约听到什么猫字):</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">,哎,没感觉啊,</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">50</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">块也可以买差不多七张</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">D9</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">了。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br />“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">熟了,一张才</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">7</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">块</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">5</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”A</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">又补充到。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">你那贵了,我们那边才</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">5</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">块,</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">最近还发现有卖全套</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">RIVATE</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">系列的</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">D9</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">。不过最近抓得挺严,想买个</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">D9</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">也不是什么易事了。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">观众</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">B</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">推了</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">A</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">一把,示意他走快点。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">不如现在去看看吧。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”A</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">和</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">B</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">异口同声。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">电影开场了,屏幕上又慢慢地出现了导演貌似有意打出的字幕:</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Cest&nbsp;&nbsp; La&nbsp;&nbsp; Vie<br /><br /></font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">背景音乐,是一个观众的呵欠。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠是个普通的女孩,一边攻读着自己钟爱的文学专业,一边把自己的课余时间排得满满,以应付那对于她家里稍显昂贵的学费,她自己知道现在这一切都来之不易。看看手机上的备注。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">嗯,今天是便利店。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">收好那本读了一半的小说,在小衣柜里不多的衣服翻出那套便利店的制服,匆忙得换上,然后在镜子面前看看自己,露出了可爱的笑脸。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">要加油,要努力。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">然后看看自己存下来的小积蓄,</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">嗯,这个月的生活费应该没有问题,或者能再去夜市逛逛,或者再买多几本书,对了,该买点小礼物么?</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br /></font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">墙上的时钟嘀嗒嘀嗒的响,悠闲自得地履行着自己的使命,秒钟积极,分钟懒散,时钟偶尔动一动,但是这一些都在进行着。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">啊,时间快到了,要赶紧咯。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br /><br /></font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">坐</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在中间的一个观众,电影才开始了不久,他已经上了</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">5</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">次的厕所,买了</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">2</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">杯可乐和</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">4</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">大包爆米花,好像平时在明亮的地方不好意思吃这么多的零食而且还有必要压制</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">自己的需要比如说上厕所。坐他旁边的那对情侣,要忍受这些零食的诱惑并非是一件容易的事情,本来仅有的,两只手偶尔会抓到同一颗的爆米花,变成了没有交集</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">的两个集合,然后丢开原先对旁边那人所产生的噪音的鄙视,却讨论起如何把爆米花吃得更响亮。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠站在收银台后面,货架上的商品摆放的整整</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">齐齐。香浓的(至少包装上看起来如此)巧克力上面是去牙渍的美白口香糖,美白口香糖旁边是不含糖的无糖口香糖,那边橱窗上的即食食品的海报上冒着热气,靠</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">着橱窗的咖喱鱼蛋并没有多少生机,沉浮,《小说》上面是一本八卦杂志,一瓶瓶诱人的威士忌下面摆放着阿司匹林,避孕套略显羞涩地含混在一片渔夫之宝,一不</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小心你就会上当。这个时候便利店没什么客流,阿楠也趁着机会跑到休息室冲了杯浓茶,下午还有文学理论课,午睡是没得指望了。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠,为什么不尝试写写小说呢?</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿珍是便利店的店长,和阿楠感情不错,现在确实没什么客人,便与阿楠聊起了天。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">噢,这可不是件容易的事啊。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br />“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">为什么不尝试下呢,也许开了头,你就不会觉得困难咯,再说你又是文学专业的,偶尔见你在报上的小品文,文字很不错啊,淡淡的,却值得回味。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br />“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">欢迎光临!</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠看见自动门打开了,便熟练而亲切地对着客人打招呼。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">紫</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">红色的桌面,凌乱,书桌右边堆满了几本书,歪歪斜斜,书的名字却被烟所模糊,变得不清晰,书的下面放着个烟灰缸,满满的,点着的一根香烟已经燃烧了一半,</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">烟灰长长,不用一点动静,甚至不用一点动静,它就会掉落。烟灰缸旁边叠起两个空烟盒,希望它们不是这样一根一根白白地燃尽(不过应该至少抽过一口来使他们</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">继续燃烧),但是谁又知道呢?左边放着一个白色的杯,杯上的卡通公仔大笑着,似乎在耻笑杯内壁那层厚厚的咖啡渍,那层咖啡渍让杯子看起来黑白分明,但随着</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">一阵咖啡的涌动,它们变得不安分。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">D</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">仔左手拿起咖啡,大大的一口。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">该死的编辑,突然明天就要拿稿,要知道突然改期,要我写出东西来,不是一件容易的事啊,说好的事情怎么可以随便变动呢?该死的,妈的,没办法,我还是要吃饭的。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br /></font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">烟灰果然掉下去了,</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">D</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">仔想过戒烟,但那不容易。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">D</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">仔继续写着。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">他</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">们两个赌气地坐在暗黑的电影院里,各自喝着各自喜欢的饮料,不再像前天,是的,前天,前天他们刚刚坐在同样的位置,捧着同一杯奶茶,你一口我一口地喝着。</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">他干脆挂上</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">Ipod</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">,听起</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">Coldplay</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">,她似乎瞥到了</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">Ipod</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">上的播放曲目,白白眼,一脸不耐烦地望着银幕。她讨厌一切摇滚,他却痴迷所有,从</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> Rolling Stone</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">到伍佰。她开始怀疑他们为什么会走到一起,没有共同喜欢的东西,没有共同的话题,她喜欢的是麻辣火锅,但他一看到辣椒就开始流眼泪,她喜欢篮</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">球,他却痴心于桥牌,上帝这个玩笑真的不容易出现,让两个完全相斥的人走到一起,并且已经</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">3</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">年了,这次吵闹已经是家常便饭,太难,不吵吵闹闹太难。。。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /><font face="Times New Roman">D</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">仔把光标移到了文档第一行,满足地把标题敲进去:《电影院里的他们》。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">随后拿出手机,发了两条短信,其中一条是边咒骂边发给编辑的。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">大</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">军,他已经</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">3</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">天没吃过饭了,肚子无时不刻在呼唤着补给,</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">3</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">天了,大军想想真不容易,又忽然想起之前在哪里见过的苦行僧的趣闻,他努力回想,不是想苦行僧们</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">能多少天不吃饭,而是在想在哪里看过。对了,是在那份报纸,他从收废纸的阿婆手里抢来的废报纸,在拉去卖给废纸摊的时候,偶尔瞥到的那张报纸。大军有这种</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">过目不忘的能力,却只能用它来记住便衣警察的样子,那个鼻子高眉毛少的是队长,那个大耳朵脸长长那个是反扒专业队,然后便于自己下手。大军终于明白不吃饭</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">并非易事,生活还是要继续,无论怎样,他要找些钱,找些东西吃。走在熙熙攘攘的街上伴随着被困</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">3</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">天部队的补给呼叫,大军发现了一位粗心(或者说怕麻烦)车</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">主,兴冲冲跑进了一家精品店,却把自己的迷彩小绵羊没圈起来就放在了店外。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">观众</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">A</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">首先打破了僵局:</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">你还记得第一次到电影院看电影么?</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br />B</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">眨了眨眼睛:</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">应该是学校组织的吧,每个学期都收了观影费,是的,我还记得是</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">16</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">块,先看一部教育片,一般都是给我们讲吸毒是如何爽,错了,那是踩火车。。。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br />“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">是猜火车。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”A</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">急切地纠错。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">也</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">行,踩,猜,差不多啦,要记住这些电影名字和记住俄国小说主人公和龙套们的名字一样困难,接着刚才,教育我们不能吸毒,把那些内脏什么的给我们看,或者看</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">些发生火灾要打</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">119</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">而不是达</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">110</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">而且如果实在学校要先保护公物之类云云,要学习什么丽姐姐,什么丽,我也忘了。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br />“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">啊,什么丽,香丽?反正不会是巩利。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”A</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">认为自己开了个玩笑。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">如果看完了教育片,时间太短的话呢,就会放放一些不是教育片的电影,不知道他们怎么选,也许是有教育意义的,对,就像《霹雳舞》,我的一个同学看了之后就考上了中央艺术学校。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”<br />“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">有这个学校么?</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”A</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">郑重地问</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">B</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">应该有吧,先看电影啦。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”B</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">似乎有些不耐烦。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在送走了客人之后,便利店又显得挺冷清,微波炉在叹着气。阿楠喝了口茶,看着店长:</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">是么?你有注意我的那些文章?其实我有个构思,想写写关于生活的小说,内容大概有了,名字也想好。第一句话和最后一句话我已经想好了,第一句就是</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">‘</font></span><span style="color:#c60a00;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">生活</span><span style="font-size:10pt;color:#c60a00;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">,</span><span style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">对于任何一个男女都非易事。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">’</font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">,最后一句就是</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">‘</span><span lang="EN-US"> Cest&nbsp;&nbsp; La&nbsp;&nbsp; Vie’</span></font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">。生活绝非易事,但无论怎样还是走下去,这就是生活。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠又看看了便利店对面的商铺,一家文具店旁边的那家叫</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">"life"</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">的小店,阿楠看上里面的一个背包已经很久,但是无奈囊中羞涩,每天她都会检查检查它是否被别人所买走。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">不错的构思啊,你应该买本大本子,把它写下来,尽快行动吧阿楠,我支持你哦。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">店长拍拍阿楠的肩膀。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">秒钟积极,分钟懒散,时钟偶尔动一动。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">店长,辛苦了,我先走咯,后天见。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠挥了挥手臂。店长在店内向她微笑。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠决定到对面的文具店买本大本子,对,要自己喜欢的米黄色。随便,随便狠狠买下那个背包。阿楠踏上斑马线,一</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">步,一步,每一步都让她的目标更近些,但实现自己的目标又岂是易事,也许一个小小的推动就会让你立即行动,或者无数天的酝酿却只会让你在行动上原地踏步。</span><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">造物主实在太巧妙,让我们人同时拥有行动和思考,并且把它们相关联,还让你能去感知它们的存在。每跨出你的一步都是不简单的,一步,一步。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">阿楠发现自己的手机在振动,她慢了下来,在袋子里找着手机,找到了,是短信。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">当</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">D</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">仔跨着步,穿过人流,来到了熟悉的地方,他停下了脚步。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">人群,血渍(这时看起来像他杯子里的咖啡渍),迷彩。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">对了,还有一部手机:</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我拿稿去给编辑,迟十分钟过去接你,编辑说今天把上次的稿费给我,我们买你那钟爱的背包去,应该够的。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">发件人:</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">D</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">仔。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">地上还摊着本小说,米黄色的书签夹在了大概一半的位置上,《生活在别处》。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">电影完了,散场了,观众们都忙着退场,银幕上打着导演最后的字幕:</span><span lang="EN-US"><br /><br /><span style="color:#c60a00"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="color:#c60a00;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">生活</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;color:#c60a00">,</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"> </span></font><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">对于任何一个男女都非易事</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">.<br /><br />“</font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">好吧,现在过去,应该还没关门。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">”B</font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">这次信心十足地告诉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><font face="Times New Roman">A</font></span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">。</span></p>
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我觉得,写小说和你要去哪儿是一回事。得先知道自己要去的目的地,然后想如何实现它,再站在一边看看自己实现得怎么样,是不是比较优良的方案。拿这个标准来衡量一下这个小说,你自己就能得出一些判断啦。
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