论技巧， 诗的肺部，诗两首

杨铁军

<div class="Section0" style="layout-grid:15.6pt none"><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-weight:bold;font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">论技巧</font></span><span style="font-weight:bold;font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'times new roman';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">我的技巧还是太巧，而我的笨拙</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">有点太聪明——这样说，我并没有自贬的</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">意思，更没有刻意炫耀的企图。</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">其实我是说，生活有很多阶段，某个阶段</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">的聪明，到另一个阶段就显得蠢笨，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">而某个阶段的蠢笨却最安心。</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">这样一看问题，生活就像布纹一样的复杂，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">似乎是多棱镜里不同版本的</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">同一对象！而幸运的是，除了在诗的瓶颈，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">这些繁杂的头绪并不拥堵，生活</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">的平顺，尤其抹平了阶段的凸起——只有在这里，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">才会夸大或缩小值得提起的</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">事物，像大小不一的泡沫此起彼伏，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">刹那间重演了过去。而这些幻觉，你也知道，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">并没有多少益处，唯一值得提起的不过是</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">它们的顽固，通过你强迫的自觉，而显得乖巧。</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">让不是事儿的事儿，乱糟糟地取消彼此的兴趣，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">甚而产生一些让我觉得很诗意的对生活的概括——其实我无意</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">停留于此：被迟到的自己鸣笛，通过这个顿悟的</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">迟钝，一下子来到完全不必要的另一个平面。</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'">2008.7.19</span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-weight:bold;font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">诗的肺部</font></span><span style="font-weight:bold;font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">诗有两个肺部，一个是你，一个是我，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">当我听到你久违的声音，我的视线被烟雾</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">扭曲了一会儿，而我的心则像树叶</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">在漩涡旁淹留了片刻，然后顺流直下，一直冲到</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">未来的底部，那恰巧碰到过去的开始。</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">我的肺呼吸了我的一生，而你的肺则替我呼吸了诗篇，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">在时光的支流里漂流了太久，突然交汇到生活的主干</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">而不再有任何关联。我还在煅炼我的语气，想像如何把你的呼吸</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">蚀刻到想象力的背后，以便你读到我的诗句的时候，</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><font face="宋体">用岁月的手，轻轻抚摸它字里行间固化的金属。</font></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'">2008.7.20</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p><p class="0" style="vertical-align:baseline;line-height:100%;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:'宋体';mso-spacerun:'yes'"><p></p></span></p></div>

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王敖

好

魔鬼魔鬼

<p>不好！论来论去，是在真诚地不真诚，技巧得不成技巧</p>