第十四届小说奖第二期复评

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发表于 2007-8-4 13:43:24 |只看该作者

邱雷推荐将计就计《盯视者》http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=24946不有《异禀》http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25944《盯视者》,这是篇写得传统而见功底的小说。将容易玄而虚的意识活动代入细腻、精当的客观环境的描述中，从而使前者落地、有了身形质量、更加切实可信，虚与实的两股力量缠绕着并行，理智和情绪似乎也因此共同呈现为语言和叙述上的单体。它在词句上自始至终的紧密、坚硬都为自身准备了充足的理由，不必再承受苛责。<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">《异禀》<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">对篇章结构的处理，特别是松紧、疾慢的控制上，显现出作者对文本策略的熟练掌握。前紧后松的设计，言语滋生的赘节，小小地出乎意料的闪光，都为这种熟练提供了证明。对科学（数学）的兴趣是表面上的，并没有将其视作作品的对象，在借用了科学在形象上的力量的同时避开了类型的陷阱，这也是讲究技巧的。

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宇文光推荐孙智正
《有点疼》http://www.heilan.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=25576 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Algerian; mso-hansi-font-family: Algerian; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">语言和主题的吻合非常美妙。所谓网恋，见网友，应该是很多人熟悉的生活方式了吧，但写的好的并不多。《有点疼》写了一个有点儿奇怪的主角。这个人的性格特别适合网恋，或者倒过来，网恋是特为这种人准备的。然而这个人又注定是网恋的弱者。因为强者无处不在，不会跟你客气。作者对语言和人物的选择恰到好处（如果有过选择的话），易凯及其女友，小西瓜的容貌和身材，都意味深长。不过钟点房里的描写似乎结束的太突然，读者可能会困惑到底发生了什么。虽然下文也有暗示，但再写清楚一些也许更好。

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高原推荐将计就计《盯视者》<a href="http://www.heilan.com/periodical/heilan_50/novel_6.htm" target="_blank">http://www.heilan.com/periodical/heilan_50/novel_6.htm</a><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">我觉得这篇小说题目起的不好听<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">当然小说写得挺棒的<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">我些词选得略有些冷僻<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">宇文光说字型伤意我觉得很有道理<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">只所以选它是因为我一直偏爱氛围烘托的好的小说<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">另外其他候选小说整体水平稍弱也是一个原因<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.

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