迷影(新作,黑蓝首发)

宫林

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>立雪门</i>在2007-7-19 22:34:49的发言：</b><br/><p>用"反乌托邦"的想法和"流浪者小说"的结构写一个现代社会中电影发明者一天的故事.这个故事跟电影的观念\\技术\\经典意象有关,小说中至少涉及以下电影:</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《旅行》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《那夜四次》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《四百下》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《闪灵》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《巴顿芬克》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">传记片《门》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">音乐幻想片《迷墙》（平克·佛罗依得）<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《陆上行舟》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; 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COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">〈下水道里的美人鱼〉（日本一套纠合了色情恐怖恶心的实验电影》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《双生花》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《4》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《德州，巴黎》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《洞穴》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《地下社会》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《石头的尖叫》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《地铁》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《不可撤消》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《唐人街》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《柳媚花娇》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《蔷薇的葬礼》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《放大》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《火车进站》(世界上的第一部电影)<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p>我原以为看过这些电影的人应该对小说有一定共鸣,但黑蓝的反应却很冷淡.有点失望,所以有了这个跟贴.</p></div><p></p>你可拉倒吧,显摆什么啊在这儿,小说写的多烂你知道吗?不知道的话,赶紧学着写,别在这块儿不着调啦!笑死人了,自以为是.

立雪门

<p>星稀,你的态度很真诚,你的批评也不无道理.</p><p>写的时候,我有一个想法就是,只要大的感觉不乱,不拒绝拼贴,想到什么就把它们贴上去.直接使用的电影名字,也并非跟小说没有关系吧,从上下文看来,自己觉得直接用也无不可的时候才直接用的;而且让我罗嗦一句,比如&lt;四百下&gt;,电影中的原意来源于法国谚语,是说如果孩子不听话,父母连续地打他四百下,他就会变乖.在小说里把这个移植到男女关系中并有所变化,这不能算直接嵌入.类似的情况还有一些,我就不废话了.</p><p>笔挺的新西装固然好,百衲衣也有自己的味道吧.</p><p>另:你猜电影的阅读方式给我提了个醒,开学再上课的时候,让学生对着这篇小说猜电影,写剧本片段.小说的好坏不论,省了一些备课的时间,也不枉我两个晚上码的这一万多字.</p>

星稀

<p>　　一个电影的名字、场面、意象从影像艺术的整体中被抽离，嫁接到文字的肌体上，它们就已经不具有原来的意义，在小说文本中成为光凸凸的没有所指的能指，那么这种拼贴手法是否必要和有用，就颇令人生疑了。从你随意的写作状态（两个晚上）来看，再严肃地谈拼贴就有点不讨好，但显见的是，你的实验做得不好。<br/>　　“大的感觉不乱”恐怕不能如你所愿，顺畅的原因在于事件（发明电影）的自圆其说，至于感觉，打个过激的比喻，一首流行歌曲的窜烧整体是没有感觉的。<br/>　　反乌托邦的观念也徒有阴冷、压抑、机械的外表，没有深入进去。文字倒是极具画面感，但也只是以“流浪者小说”架构起来的、在路上的猎奇者的镜头所呈现的没有实体的雾中风景。<br/>　　我很怀念上电影课的美好时光。不过对在课堂上从一篇文字里猜电影的训练，我保留意见。即使全猜对了，也仅仅是对头脑库存的一次简单确认和调出，记忆对一部电影的价值而言并不重要，除非你培养的是电影档案管理员。</p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-28 13:11:56编辑过]

酒童

哈哈,立雪门,你一功两用啊,又写过瘾文,又当教材.[em05]

宫林

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>立雪门</i>在2007-7-19 22:34:49的发言：</b><br/><p>用"反乌托邦"的想法和"流浪者小说"的结构写一个现代社会中电影发明者一天的故事.这个故事跟电影的观念\\技术\\经典意象有关,小说中至少涉及以下电影:</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《旅行》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《那夜四次》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《四百下》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《闪灵》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《巴顿芬克》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; 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COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《唐人街》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《柳媚花娇》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《蔷薇的葬礼》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《放大》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《火车进站》(世界上的第一部电影)<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p>我原以为看过这些电影的人应该对小说有一定共鸣,但黑蓝的反应却很冷淡.有点失望,所以有了这个跟贴.</p></div><p></p>你可拉倒吧,显摆什么啊在这儿,小说写的多烂你知道吗?不知道的话,赶紧学着写,别在这块儿不着调啦!笑死人了,自以为是.

立雪门

<p>星稀,你的态度很真诚,你的批评也不无道理.</p><p>写的时候,我有一个想法就是,只要大的感觉不乱,不拒绝拼贴,想到什么就把它们贴上去.直接使用的电影名字,也并非跟小说没有关系吧,从上下文看来,自己觉得直接用也无不可的时候才直接用的;而且让我罗嗦一句,比如&lt;四百下&gt;,电影中的原意来源于法国谚语,是说如果孩子不听话,父母连续地打他四百下,他就会变乖.在小说里把这个移植到男女关系中并有所变化,这不能算直接嵌入.类似的情况还有一些,我就不废话了.</p><p>笔挺的新西装固然好,百衲衣也有自己的味道吧.</p><p>另:你猜电影的阅读方式给我提了个醒,开学再上课的时候,让学生对着这篇小说猜电影,写剧本片段.小说的好坏不论,省了一些备课的时间,也不枉我两个晚上码的这一万多字.</p>

星稀

<p>　　一个电影的名字、场面、意象从影像艺术的整体中被抽离，嫁接到文字的肌体上，它们就已经不具有原来的意义，在小说文本中成为光凸凸的没有所指的能指，那么这种拼贴手法是否必要和有用，就颇令人生疑了。从你随意的写作状态（两个晚上）来看，再严肃地谈拼贴就有点不讨好，但显见的是，你的实验做得不好。<br/>　　“大的感觉不乱”恐怕不能如你所愿，顺畅的原因在于事件（发明电影）的自圆其说，至于感觉，打个过激的比喻，一首流行歌曲的窜烧整体是没有感觉的。<br/>　　反乌托邦的观念也徒有阴冷、压抑、机械的外表，没有深入进去。文字倒是极具画面感，但也只是以“流浪者小说”架构起来的、在路上的猎奇者的镜头所呈现的没有实体的雾中风景。<br/>　　我很怀念上电影课的美好时光。不过对在课堂上从一篇文字里猜电影的训练，我保留意见。即使全猜对了，也仅仅是对头脑库存的一次简单确认和调出，记忆对一部电影的价值而言并不重要，除非你培养的是电影档案管理员。</p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-28 13:11:56编辑过]

酒童

哈哈,立雪门,你一功两用啊,又写过瘾文,又当教材.[em05]

宫林

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>立雪门</i>在2007-7-19 22:34:49的发言：</b><br/><p>用"反乌托邦"的想法和"流浪者小说"的结构写一个现代社会中电影发明者一天的故事.这个故事跟电影的观念\\技术\\经典意象有关,小说中至少涉及以下电影:</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《旅行》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《那夜四次》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《四百下》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《闪灵》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《巴顿芬克》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">传记片《门》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">音乐幻想片《迷墙》（平克·佛罗依得）<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《陆上行舟》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; 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COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《石头的尖叫》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《地铁》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《不可撤消》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《唐人街》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《柳媚花娇》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《蔷薇的葬礼》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《放大》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《火车进站》(世界上的第一部电影)<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p>我原以为看过这些电影的人应该对小说有一定共鸣,但黑蓝的反应却很冷淡.有点失望,所以有了这个跟贴.</p></div><p></p>你可拉倒吧,显摆什么啊在这儿,小说写的多烂你知道吗?不知道的话,赶紧学着写,别在这块儿不着调啦!笑死人了,自以为是.

立雪门

<p>星稀,你的态度很真诚,你的批评也不无道理.</p><p>写的时候,我有一个想法就是,只要大的感觉不乱,不拒绝拼贴,想到什么就把它们贴上去.直接使用的电影名字,也并非跟小说没有关系吧,从上下文看来,自己觉得直接用也无不可的时候才直接用的;而且让我罗嗦一句,比如&lt;四百下&gt;,电影中的原意来源于法国谚语,是说如果孩子不听话,父母连续地打他四百下,他就会变乖.在小说里把这个移植到男女关系中并有所变化,这不能算直接嵌入.类似的情况还有一些,我就不废话了.</p><p>笔挺的新西装固然好,百衲衣也有自己的味道吧.</p><p>另:你猜电影的阅读方式给我提了个醒,开学再上课的时候,让学生对着这篇小说猜电影,写剧本片段.小说的好坏不论,省了一些备课的时间,也不枉我两个晚上码的这一万多字.</p>