迷影(新作,黑蓝首发)

星稀

<p>　　一个电影的名字、场面、意象从影像艺术的整体中被抽离，嫁接到文字的肌体上，它们就已经不具有原来的意义，在小说文本中成为光凸凸的没有所指的能指，那么这种拼贴手法是否必要和有用，就颇令人生疑了。从你随意的写作状态（两个晚上）来看，再严肃地谈拼贴就有点不讨好，但显见的是，你的实验做得不好。<br/>　　“大的感觉不乱”恐怕不能如你所愿，顺畅的原因在于事件（发明电影）的自圆其说，至于感觉，打个过激的比喻，一首流行歌曲的窜烧整体是没有感觉的。<br/>　　反乌托邦的观念也徒有阴冷、压抑、机械的外表，没有深入进去。文字倒是极具画面感，但也只是以“流浪者小说”架构起来的、在路上的猎奇者的镜头所呈现的没有实体的雾中风景。<br/>　　我很怀念上电影课的美好时光。不过对在课堂上从一篇文字里猜电影的训练，我保留意见。即使全猜对了，也仅仅是对头脑库存的一次简单确认和调出，记忆对一部电影的价值而言并不重要，除非你培养的是电影档案管理员。</p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-28 13:11:56编辑过]

酒童

哈哈,立雪门,你一功两用啊,又写过瘾文,又当教材.[em05]

宫林

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>立雪门</i>在2007-7-19 22:34:49的发言：</b><br/><p>用"反乌托邦"的想法和"流浪者小说"的结构写一个现代社会中电影发明者一天的故事.这个故事跟电影的观念\\技术\\经典意象有关,小说中至少涉及以下电影:</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《旅行》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《那夜四次》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《四百下》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《闪灵》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《巴顿芬克》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; 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COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《唐人街》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《柳媚花娇》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《蔷薇的葬礼》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《放大》<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0.9pt 0pt 13.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; tab-stops: 36.0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">《火车进站》(世界上的第一部电影)<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p>我原以为看过这些电影的人应该对小说有一定共鸣,但黑蓝的反应却很冷淡.有点失望,所以有了这个跟贴.</p></div><p></p>你可拉倒吧,显摆什么啊在这儿,小说写的多烂你知道吗?不知道的话,赶紧学着写,别在这块儿不着调啦!笑死人了,自以为是.

立雪门

<p>小林子,你的语气说明你已经失去理智了.为了让你清醒一点,我最后说以下几点,权当是治疗心理疾病的顺势疗法.</p><p>其一,你不懂的不关心的就是"大道理"?哥们不才,26岁拿了文学博士学位,现在大学里教文学和电影,同时写作小说和剧本，是本校最年轻的受学生喜爱的副教授（这么说怪不好意思的）,我为什么不能在你面前摆点道理?给你上点课是看得起你，只是你并不是一个可爱的学生，这么简单的东西,你都不懂那是你的事情.你说，咱俩谁可笑幼稚？</p><p>其二,哥们出过三四本书,发表的小说和文章数十万字,如果你真是个文学青年,没准你以前还看过我的作品,我来黑蓝完全不可能是为了满足虚荣心（要满足虚荣心我穿马夹干吗？）我在90年代末混网络文学的时候,黑蓝还不成气候呢.我来黑蓝是因为这里有一群写得不错的朋友,有的我见过面有的没见过,我来,是为了这里良好的小说写作的氛围,以期让自己停滞了几年的小说写作能够继续,并有所提高.</p><p>其三,写小说为什么不能扯电影?你的视野就这么窄吗?我说黑蓝的反应冷淡,是说给几个交流过的朋友听的,而且我根本也没有不服的意思,只想让大家看看聊聊，怎么谈得上叫板呢．我很纳闷，谁两腿没夹紧,把你小子掉下来了?轮的着你出头？上上下下看一遍，你丫有头吗？</p><p>其四,我的作品也许不怎么样,我的水平也许一瓶子是不满,但我自问比那些本来一滴没有,怎么射也射不出来的"宫人"强吧.就你的水平，你收拾谁？斗嘴你都不是个！</p><p>以上文字如果能让你冷静一点那是最好，如果你压根就没治了，你当然可以长久地疯下去，只是哥们没闲心奉陪了．</p>

宫林

行了,看你说出这么多,也是心地单纯的人,我就不再说了,你继续努力,加油.

边河

<div class="quote" twffan="done"><b>以下是引用<i>宫林</i>在2007-7-29 20:16:54的发言：</b><br/>行了,看你说出这么多,也是心地单纯的人,我就不再说了,你继续努力,加油.</div><p>突然就转了调调[em06]</p><p>我妈曾经非常三八地说我的一个女同学长的真不好看（我很公正地说的确长的别扭），我就这么回答我妈的：她在她老妈眼里是最漂亮的！所以很难说很难说.............</p>

立雪门

还真有挑事和看热闹的！边大影音斑竹的意思我懂，请教一下，别扭在什么地方呢？

边河

您可不能这样，边大.......折杀了我。[em04]

星稀

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>立雪门</i>在2007-7-29 19:02:14的发言：</b><br/><p>其一,你不懂的不关心的就是"大道理"?哥们不才,26岁拿了文学博士学位,现在大学里教文学和电影,同时写作小说和剧本，是本校最年轻的受学生喜爱的副教授（这么说怪不好意思的）,我为什么不能在你面前摆点道理?给你上点课是看得起你，只是你并不是一个可爱的学生，这么简单的东西,你都不懂那是你的事情.你说，咱俩谁可笑幼稚？</p><p>其二,哥们出过三四本书,发表的小说和文章数十万字,如果你真是个文学青年,没准你以前还看过我的作品,</p></div><p>肉麻的冷笑话。</p>

立雪门

<p>不冷也不可笑,我向来就是个高调的人.</p>