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什么事情需要那么多钱?

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发表于 2007-8-4 13:39:18 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New Roman\';">什么事情需要那么多钱?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">五月的前一个周末,余晖决定回一次家。每天下午的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">点钟,有一辆大巴从广州的沙河开往他的镇上。他是黄昏时候踏进家门的。那时候家里人已经吃过了。很显然,他的突然归家让父母多少有点儿意外。母亲问他,我还以为你要“五一”才回来呢,这么说,下周你不准备回来了?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">嗯,不回来了。余晖点了点头,继续低下头去吞嚼着母亲刚给他买回来的点心。他的确饿了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">那你准备干吗?母亲拿了块抹布,在仔细地擦着灶头,那儿有些脏。难道就呆在学校里?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">差不多吧。余晖似乎没有在认真听母亲的说话,只是随意地回答了一句。又吃了几口,才想起来什么了,抬起头来,哦,对,妈,我爸近来的生意怎么样了?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">越来越难做了。母亲停下了擦拭的动作,转过身来,感慨说,现在镇上的人都走光了,哪还有多少生意,你爸说,要不是你还在读大学的话,他也想出去外面闯闯,隔壁的老贺叫他出去开锯木厂好几次了,现在老贺在花都开这个可赚了大钱了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">那干吗不出去?我也觉得挺好的啊。花都离我读书的地方也不远。余晖把最后一口吃了下去,然后从椅子上站起来,走到母亲面前,把碗和筷子伸给她。老妈,帮我把碗洗了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">说得容易,听老贺吹得好像一开厂就能赚钱是的,可要是赔了呢。母亲往锅里倒了一勺热水,拿起另一条抹布,倒上点“立白”洗洁精,俯下身子涮起碗来。要是赔了,你还想要读书啊,学费一年一万多呢,还有你的生活费怎么办,所以我跟你爸说,在家里赚钱苦是苦了点,但稳定,无论如何,先等你毕业了,不用我们操心了,再作打算。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">哦。余晖若有所思的点了下头。对,水热了没有,我要洗澡了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">洗完了澡,余晖就离开了家门,去了表姐家的铺子。和大姑表姐她们聊了几句后,他就和表弟在铺子门口打了几场桌球。最后一场他赢了。于是他把球杆往球桌上一摆,从裤兜里掏出手机,看了一眼,说,都快十点了,我要回家去了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">门锁了,但屋里灯还亮着。父亲母亲这会儿肯定在等他回家。他在门口咳嗽了声,爸,开门,是我。不一会,铁门哐啷地一下开了,从屋里跌出来一片光亮。余晖走了进去,父亲在他身后锁了门。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">母亲正坐在椅子上绣花,这会儿抬起头来,对他笑了笑,回来了。余晖搬了张塑料椅子坐在母亲的身旁,看了会她如何绣花。父亲走了进来,也坐下了。喝了一口水后,问他,晖,今年的学习难不难,期中考试考得怎么样了?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">拜托,老爸,现在大学还哪来的期中考试!我们就学期末考一次试,就完了。嗯,这学期课比较多,不过我感觉学得还可以。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">你要好好争气啊,不要让你爸你妈被人笑才好,家里出你一个大学生,花的钱不知道有多少。母亲抬起头来,插嘴说。母亲一抬头,余晖就看见了她眼角上细密的皱纹。余晖就知道母亲会说这些话。每次母亲就只会说这些话。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">不过,唯一让余晖有些不安的是,他只考上了大专,并且是私立大专。所以当他一听到别人说他读大学,就觉得很刺耳。连母亲都不例外。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖嗯了一声,说,知道了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">屋里就没有声音了。大家都在忙自己的事情。父亲发呆,母亲绣花,余晖在打量着屋里的一切。一切还是老样子。日光灯嗡嗡响着。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">也不知过了多久,父亲从座椅上站了起来,打了个哈欠,说,不早了,你上楼睡去吧。嗯,你明天一早就要回学校是吗?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">是,后天还要上课呢。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">你生活费还够不够,我记得好像是两个月前才给你汇了三千,你用完了没有?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">还没呢,还有一千多吧。余晖手扶着塑料椅把,看着父亲,一边回答,一边在想,那件事情要不要现在说呢,要不要呢。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">母亲在收拾绣花篮子。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">好吧,那你快去睡吧,明天五点车就来了,你还要早起呢。父亲说完,就准备走到里面的卧室去。坐车的钱明天跟你妈拿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">爸。余晖决定还是开口。我还有件事想跟你商量呢。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">什么事?父亲转过了头,有些疑惑的打量着儿子。儿子已经长得比自己高很多了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">嗯,我想跟你再拿点钱,我有事情。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">可以,你要多少?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">两千五吧。迟疑了会,余晖还是开了口。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">你要那么多钱干什么?母亲正在把篮子放在架子上,这会儿听见余晖的开价,吓了一跳,你不是还有一千多吗?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我有事情。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">什么事情,什么事情需要那么多钱?母亲追问到底。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">父亲没说话。他从口袋里掏出一根烟,点上了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖早知道他们会问清楚的。于是他照着想好的话说,我,我出了点事情,我女朋的肚子大了,现在急要一笔钱打胎。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我的天!母亲眼睛顿时睁大了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖看了看她,又瞥了眼父亲。我是没办法,才回家来跟你们商量。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">你怎么这么不小心呢?母亲絮叨起来。我交钱让你去读书可没有让你去交女朋友,你年纪轻轻交什么女朋友,大学毕业了就不能交吗,啊?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖不说话。但他把头低下了。他觉得有些不安。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">打胎需要那么多钱吗?父亲终于开口说话了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">嗯。余晖抬起了头,但避开了父亲的眼睛。正规的医院就要。我女朋友怕去那些不干净的医院。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">屋里又安静了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">父亲长长地吐了口烟。好吧,明天给你,现在你早点睡吧,别明天起不来。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖上楼去了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">刚跨了两步,母亲的声音追了上来,你明早要怎么吃,要不我做鸡蛋粥给你吃,这可是你小时候最喜欢吃的。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">算了,太麻烦了,车那么早就开走。余晖回过头说,我还是在等车的地方随便吃点就行了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">那就随你。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖在床上躺了会,楼下的灯光就熄了。一切陷入黑暗中。余晖支起耳朵来,听见楼下父母窸窸簌簌的换衣声。接着是上床声。上床后,父亲和母亲低声说了一会儿话,然后一切就安静了。这时余晖才注意到,窗外的虫鸣是多么的热闹。他盯着头顶上浮在黑暗中的床架子,看着看着,突然泪水流了下来。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖是被父亲叫醒的。天还很黑呢。叫醒了他,父亲就轻声地下楼去了。隔壁房间他妹妹还在睡觉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖下了楼来,在厨房里洗涮完毕后,就走进了里间父母的卧室。可能是天还没亮的原因,卧室的灯让余晖觉得有些刺眼。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">父亲又躺回到了床上。蚊帐后面传来他的翻身声。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">母亲已经坐在桌前等他了。看见他进来,母亲沾了下口水,把手里的钱又点了一遍,然后递了过去,看了他一眼,说,你数一下,三千块。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">怎么给我三千?我只要两千五。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">昨晚上我跟你爸商量了,那几百块是给那女孩子补补身子。刚打完胎的人,身子一定很弱。母亲又看了他一眼。以后你们行事的时候多注意点。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">不用了,她不需要补什么身子,就两千五够了。余晖有些急了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">放屁!蚊帐后面父亲说话了。你怎么这么不负责任?要你拿着你就拿着。以后干什么都要自己想清楚点,不要老让父母跟在你后面给你擦屁股。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖低下头,把钱接了过去,数了数。他数钱的手势可真糟糕。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">数完了钱,他把钱包拿出来,这时候母亲开口了,这么多钱,你就放在一个钱包里?我看你最好还是多放几处,衣服上或者行李里也放一些,不然给偷了怎么办。广州那地方,你又不是不知道贼多。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖照办了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">母亲又塞给他三百块,这一百块是给你搭车的,那两百,是给你买衣服的,昨晚我看见你的牛仔裤膝盖有个不小的洞呢。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">余晖不想要那两百块,但还是接了过来。他知道,就算推辞,母亲也是会塞到他口袋中的。他是他母亲的儿子,他了解她。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">收拾了东西,差不多了,余晖提起行李,又走进了卧室,对蚊帐说,爸,我走了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">回答他的是一个翻身。接着父亲才说,路上多注意点。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">母亲送他到门口。记得常打电话回家。母亲帮他抻了抻衣摆后说。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这个动作让他鼻子陡然一酸。他低下头,嗯了一句,那妈,我走了哦。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">走吧。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">往前走了一会儿后,铁门才哐啷啷拉了过去。他回过头去,门已经关上了。房子蹲在黑暗中,似乎一下子消失了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">在车上余晖很快就睡着了。醒来后,已经十点多了。车刚过惠州。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">他拿出手机,发了条短信:老婆…我回来了…等会你过来沙河这边接我…咱们去天河城那边吃饭…</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">不一会,信息回来了:嘻嘻…老公…我还没有起床呢…好的…我等会就过去…吃完咱们再去逛一下服装城…现在可是换季打折哦…</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">他按了几下,出来:好的…老婆…我从家里带来了三千块…五一的七天…咱们就可以到北京去快快乐乐地玩了…</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">是吗…老公…你太伟大了…我好爱你…现在真想亲死你…</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="right" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt; TEXT-ALIGN: right;"><chsdate wst="on" isrocdate="False" islunardate="False" day="30" month="12" year="1899"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">06.10.29</font></span></chsdate><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p>
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只想写得简练,但实际上写出来,效果却没有,没有气氛,没有隐含的,那么点事,都摆出来了,也就白得没有了任何效果。不说写,就是单单地讲给人听,估计听的人也就只是笑笑而已,一不懂事的学生做的事,此外就再没有什么了,没有让人被触动的东西。
我知道什么呢? http://zhaosong.blogcn.com/index.shtml
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