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<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt;text-align:center"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">头版头条</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">一个路口之后,小朝微微张开双臂,贴着公寓外围的矮栅栏走直线。他脚下的积雪咯吱作响。</span><span style="font-family:楷体_gb2312">这就是猫步吧?模特儿都是这样走路的吧……薇斯卡·巴登真漂亮……客厅的暖气有没有关?早晨上班的时候检查过了……后来怎么睡着了?……当时不在场……电视谁关的……叫得厉害……邻居家吵得厉害……玻璃破了……</span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">他打了个寒颤,险些失去平衡一头栽进别家院子。他定了定神,开始抽烟。吸到第四口的时候手机响了。主任打来的。他说,下午四点的时候已经把材料交给编辑部的小桃红了,估计现在已经上版面儿了。自己现在在</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">XX</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">大街,要赶回来大概还要一个半小时。该说的不该说的都被他一口气全说完了,末了主任讪讪地打了个哈气说下次一定要经过他的手才能交上去。小朝站在大街上咧嘴笑片刻,手机挂断,他的脸又像烫熟的拉面一样挂了下来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">送报纸的大叔骑着小三轮,在街对面就他招了招手。过了前面的路口后又跟他打招呼。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">送报的说:下班早呀。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">恩。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">送报的又说:看到你了,报纸上。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">挺快的。小朝想。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">好,那我去忙了。送报的走了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝继续踩雪走直线。</span><span style="font-family:楷体_gb2312">该买什么呢……她是不是今天过生日,我记得去年的这个时候……我是干嘛的……饭点儿了,要不一起吃个饭,然后……困了睡觉……对呀,明天我休假,明天再找她……要不要马上打个电话……不方便,不安全……邻居会乱说话的……</span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝闷头一看,一只大狗横在他脚底下,也在龇牙咧嘴地看他。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">大狗追着小朝跑了小半条街,间接引发了一场交通意外。一辆出租车冲破了矮栅栏,开进了人家的院子里,掀飞了一块草皮湿漉漉地粘在这户人家的窗户上,正好挡住了“圣诞快乐”的前三个字。屋子里随即传出一阵哐哐当当的声音,声音未停,男主人已经披着一件绿色军大衣走出来。怎么回事?他问。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机的解释是紧急避让的结果。男主人刁起白嘴的香烟,半蹲身子观察两个前车轮,接着绕到后面。他双手插在裤兜,若有所思地望着车屁股冒出的黑烟。这个时候饭前饭后围观人就陆续多了起来。雪完全停了,哪边传来狗的吠叫声。男主人习惯性地将脑袋往右侧转了转,然后就得出了不一样的结论。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">两人吵得不可开交。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男主人说:这样吧兄弟,快过年了我也不跟你多计较。两人相互对视着,男主人向车主要一百。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机说:钱,我不给。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男人一下子握紧了拳头。哪知司机悠然道:你找那个人要。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机回头找小朝,看了半天没有他人影,倒是围观者走了不少。街面顿时冷清了下来,风呼呼地刮着,男主人跺跺脚,点头瞪眼的,用手指了指司机后也张望起来,然后他跑到一旁,从积雪下来拉出一根浇水的皮管,在方向盘上打了个死结,最后不得不进屋加了件衣服再出来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">两人接着吵。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男主人说:这样吧兄弟,快过年了我也不跟你多计较。他眼睛通红的,估计是受了凉。司机咂咂嘴摇头,说五十块钱他也不给。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男主人摘下手套,疾走到司机面前。司机连连后退两小步,他的腰靠在了车门上。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">给,还是不给?男人伸一根手指。司机拉紧皮大衣领口,还是不给。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男主人当即掉头朝屋子走了三四步,突然转身,掏出手机要报警。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机说:警察来了他也不给,因为这件事不是能怪他。要怪就怪刚才横穿马路的人。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">不通。男主人自言自语。他放下手机,不通,那你说怎么办吧。他问他。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">你有损失,但你不能让我承担。这样吧,我帮你抓住那个横穿马路的。司机打开车门,上来,我开车带你找他。找到了就是你跟他的事了,大不了完事后我再把你送回来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男主人问:你知道他长什么模样?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">知道。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男人回屋关了灯后便上了出租车,水管早就被司机偷偷解开。起初两人无话。后来司机说:我说,刚才我还以为会出来一个女的呢,一般发生这种事情都是女人出面解决——没想到你出来了——你老婆上班还没回来?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男人看着窗外,点了支烟后才说:到处跑,也不知道上哪儿疯了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机叹出口白气,想说什么又没说,车子巅了一下,他突然皱着眉头问邻座:你有没有觉得,觉得有点不对劲?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">男主人也惊恐起来,他说:该不会有其他男人吧?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机摇了摇头,再不说什么。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝回到家里换了衣裤。衣服不知道在哪蹭脏了,全是白灰,热毛巾都擦不掉,怕是要送去干洗了。还有裤子也被化开的雪弄湿了。他干脆洗礼个澡,二十分钟后他听见自己的手机在响。他穿着短裤跑了出来,刚接手机,铃声就停。他以为是她打来的,仔细一看,原来是主任找他。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">失望。略显失望。小朝慢悠悠地穿好衣服回了电话,当时主任在吃面条。小朝知道主任吃面条爱放辣,辣得稀里哗啦的才好。电话那头主任大声吆喝:斯(吸气音),小朝……斯……你还得加个班,斯,赶紧……斯……到</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">XX</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">大街上。太好了,斯,千载难逢,一车两命,斯,快去快去,斯,明天头版头条斯。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝赶到那里的时候警察已经封锁了现场。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">什么情况?小朝向其中某个警察递烟。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">不知道。初步判断是油箱漏油着火的。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">人呢。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">一个当场死亡,另一个送到医院,估计是活不了。警察正了正帽牙儿,推开挤进来的市民。对小朝小声嘀咕了两句。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">有这样的事?小朝吃了一惊。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">得了,我只能说到这儿,不然明天上面又要拿我们问话了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝笑了笑:都是基层工作者嘛,我们各侍其主。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">警察也笑了笑:小朝你少跟我来这套。我不知道你嘛。行了行了。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">XX</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">医院,赶紧的,没准独家。警察伸手跟小朝要东西。小朝又笑了起来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">警察正色道:少跟我磨洋工。规矩你也不是不知道。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我出门忘带了,真没有。小朝为难地说。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">警察摘下帽子,说:医院我都告诉你了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">那也不行啊,根本没有。小朝说。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">警察指着小朝的鼻子说:你可……</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝立即从口袋里掏出个黑乎乎的东西,说这个是数码相机,是自己家的东西拿来办公的,你收不得。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">警察擒住小朝的不让他走。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝说:我全删了,你看呀。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">警察掰开小朝的手,笑嘻嘻地说:就当借给朋友玩两天。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝打车到</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">XX</font></span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">医院的时候手机响了。她打来的。电话那头说:今天下午做头发,做了三四个钟头。所以就没找你……你不知道有多无聊,我一看报纸就念到了你的名字……你说怪不怪……嗯,是缘分呐……人家想你了……</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝问到抢救的医生,刚走两步就看见了挂在白单的推车。人已经死了。急救医生摘下口罩找水喝,小朝跟着出来,医生喝完水后尝试着把手中的一次性杯子扔进垃圾桶,失败后说:还不知道亲属。不用采访了,就照惯例写吧。小朝点了点头。医生上厕所的时候,小朝给主任通了电话,主任丢给他“自由发挥”四个字后便让他收工。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝坐上车后打开手机信箱,按照短信内容抱了一个地址的名字。司机瞟了眼小朝,一边发动汽车一边说:兄弟,我们见过吗?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">没有。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机挠了挠有点秃顶的脑门,寻思道:确实,确实。好像就是刚才。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝有点糊涂了,便说:刚才我也是打车来医院的,这趟不会还是你吧?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机否认说不是。然后又问小朝是不是有亲戚住院了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝思考片刻,才道:你知不知道今天出了一起车祸?有两个人死了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机说:知道呀,当时我在这边开着,那人在转弯道上开,然后“熊”一声车子就着火了,不到两秒钟那车子就炸了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝赶紧问:师傅你当时在场吗?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在场呀。司机得意起来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝又问:你看见车里坐的人吗?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机咳嗽了一声说:两个男的,一个是驾驶员,另一个坐在他旁边,当时两个人好像在说什么。呵呵,一下死俩,要上头版头条了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝“哦”了一声再无多话。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">没过一会儿,车子突然抛锚了。司机下来弄了半天车子依然不动,小朝站在路灯下抽着烟。司机瞟了眼上半身被灯光照得雪白的小朝,紧张起来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">看来要另外叫车了。小朝说。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机拦住小朝,焦急地说:再等会儿。再等会儿。小朝望了望黑漆漆的四周,只得叹声同意。他又抽了一支烟。半天过去了,司机终于从车前盖那儿探出脑袋,说:弄好了,你先上车吧。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">这时小朝意兴阑珊地挥手:算了算了,我还有几步路就到家了,我走回去。说完便走。司机从后面死死拉住小朝。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">这我可不给钱呀,你耽误我多少功夫。小朝没好气地说。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机喷着白气,说:我,不收你钱。真的。你,赶紧上车吧。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">免费的?小朝问。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">免费的。司机回答。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小朝坐上车,发现空调吹出的是冷气,你热呀?他看了司机一眼。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">司机没回话。小朝挪了挪屁股,他感觉那里有点痒,就伸手挠了挠</span><span style="font-family:楷体_gb2312">……屁股真挺,像足球一样……胸脯也很饱满……今天还要不要去?我总感觉要出事……明天我不是休假吗,那这个头条交给谁弄……一车两命……斯……血流如注……身首异处……</span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">当他把手上黏糊糊、湿漉漉、黑湫湫的东西拿到眼前看个究竟的时候,一把硬邦邦的扳手砸在了他的脑袋上。小朝似乎又听见了嘶嘶的声音,像什么东西在漏气一样。</span><span style="font-family:楷体_gb2312">一个洞……两个洞……三个洞……窜风……有只狗在喘气……前面有光,走过去看看……地上一滩血……快跑,空袭……</span><span style="font-family:宋体">小朝刚伸出一只手,就被扳手打了下来。</span><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">他在失去知觉之前还听到司机一个劲地解释:裤子怎么会沾上血?第二个了,今天已经干掉两个了……</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;text-indent:21.75pt"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New 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发表于 2008-2-13 11:35:35 |只看该作者
<p>整个小说止步于一个惊险(可是氛围没有制造出来)却不精彩的故事,太浅。表述上不是很清晰,有些句子不好,可以有更好的表达方法的。分段也太随意。</p><p></p><p></p>
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